jueves, 20 de marzo de 2008

Corrections on Previous Blogs

Mr. Tangen, here are my corrections for the blogs on The Waste Land. The first sentence is the original, incorrect version and the second is the fixed result:

It reminds me of the Geek gods and Titans of the waters, Poseidon, Ocean, Pontus, Nereus, Triton, and Proteus.

It reminds me of the Greek gods and Titans of the waters, Poseidon, Ocean, Pontus, Nereus, Triton, and Proteus.


In this case, the reader only makes very long pauses in the end of stanzas, which are understood as something similar to paragraphs.

In this case, the reader only makes very long pauses at the end of every stanza, which are understood as something similar to paragraphs.


Besides emphasizing important sections, the the speaker accented specific words in each of the verses.

Besides emphasizing important sections, the speaker accented specific words in each of the verses.